Immortal
(I wrote this when i was having a fight with one of my special friends niviya.
I was angry at her for something that she said about me…
These words that fall
one by one
divides this paper
or is it just me?
but yet how they carry
the words i wish
my face would say
one day i know
dust would take my place
yet what i feel now would remain
as something that exists…but does not
these feeling though everlasting
are useless , powerless
for they cannot make me not feel
for
their destiny is their death
should i pity them?
for their eternal pain
what greater punishment for an immortal
than a destiny of death
But isn’t it the same as mine?
the wound is fresh
and the knife remains
for blows from back
no armour can prevent
and seldom heal
but is it that big a deal?
for is it right to expect
mercy from the heartless
loyalty from a snake
but does she understand
that with every stroke that she takes
further she gets from the island
the harder it to reach the fire by night
or is it a new shore she search’s?
But i wish i could do my part
stop her from going far
but alas by pride
muffles it up
and churns out this worthless poem
(The line about the shore was originally "new one", Niv’s suggested it to be shore 
)
ha ha ha..wats this “”former special friend”"…sorry if i hurt ur feelings…
Comment by prince — June 19, 2006 @ 9:57 am
no hurt….its what i felt and wrote it down….
Comment by cafm — June 19, 2006 @ 1:26 pm